Until now, i still remember when i was a little child about 6 years old, i used to like Xuan Mai very much because of her beautiful voice. But when i grow up, i realize that my father is the person who i love best . Although he and i belongs to two different generations , we also have some similarities and differences in the lifestyle, sometimes, we misunderstood each other and have some small arguments, with the same characteristics, i feel that my father is my close friend.
Infact, my father and i have a not good lifestyle that is careless. And the result is that my mother always has to clean our house regularly. Although my mom time by time reminds me to clean up my room, i also forget on purpose and tell some white lies to ask her do that for me. Of course my father is not an exception, he always throws things everywhere, this makes my house look so sloppy and messy. Oneday, he needed his red tie but he couldn't find it anywhere, he gradually got angry and only saw it under the pillows on the sofa after 20 minutes. Besides it, both of us are extraverted. In fact, in my university,i have a lot of friends , i always feel funny when i talk to other people. Morever, i often join in some clubs such as: English club, skillful club.....They make me feel more active and i also get more friends. Certainly, my father also has many friends, too.His habit is doing some outdoor activities such as:climbing, swimming with his fiends. As a result, my mother offen complaint about my father and me because we often rarely stay at home and leave her alone with housework. Besides some same things like this, we also have differences in lifestyle. At first, my father is a risk-taking person. He actually enjoy trying new feelings.I still remember one day on August,he took me to a completely high mountain in Sweden , at first i was so scare and didn't dare to climb, but he was a different story, he was eager to prepared everything carefully and gradually climbed until he reached the top of this mountain.Secondly, i am so contrast to my father.He is an earlyrising but i am not. Indeed, he always gets up so early at 5 o'clock and does some morning exercises . For instance:lifting, jogging...Though he reminds me many times but i can't do same thing like that. I like to wake up late to lie on charming bed with my warm blanket.
Every body must has their idols, i am ,too.But my idol is my dear father. I love him because he has some same things to me. Of course, he still has different points but i also love all of them
the thesis is a little bit misunderstanding
Trả lờiXóayour idea is good however you have some mistakes in grammar.
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